Write that essay sentence 3

 The ed sentence

Try starting your sentence with the -ed  form of the verb.It makes for a punchy start to a sentence.

remember the rule:When you have finished your -ed phase,place a comma,then write the rest of the sentence.

Some-ed words:Surprised,exited,angered,possess,committed,electrified,undaunted,overpowered,concerned,delighted,enthralled.

Example:Determined to win,Tony pushed himself in the last meters of the sprint.

concerned for the well being of others, the Prime Minister passed new laws.

Horrified by the gore,I turned away from the screen.

My examples:

Determined,Alex forced himself to the limit.

Pleased of the students,the teacher gave out chocolates.

Overpowered,The villain destroyed the city.

Horrified,the students all ran out of class.

The Power sentence

If you waffle a lot in you writing,try using a power sentence.Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less.Get straight to the point.

Example:

Money is the root of all evil.(7)

What is right isn't always popular.(6)

treat people the way you want to be treated.(9)

money isn't everything in life.(5)

Write that essay sentence 2

 The W sentence

Try starting your sentence with a W word.These sentence make you work sound thoughtful and knowledgeable.

Remembered the rule:Not every W words work as a sentence starter.Remember to put your comma in when the parts of the sentence affected by your W are finished.

Some W words you can use:Who,while,whilst,whereas,when,where,what,with,whom.

Example:Whilst the teacher was talking ,the students were pretending to listen.

With a majority of the votes,Hitler seized power.

When the bell rings,we run to leave class.

When the teacher writes on the the students talk behind her.

While the teachers talking, Karuria is listening to music 

Whilst karuria and hrishaal where listening to music,they were also doing there work.

Whilst the teachers talking,karauria was listening to music

when the teacher came to see hrishaal work, he quickly changed the tab.

The ing sentence

Try start the sentence the-ing form of the verb.Swimming

Remember the rule:When you have finished your-ing phase,place a comma,then write the rest of the sentence.

Some ing words:Listening ,Watching,running,recycling,realising,emerging,grasping,speaking,analysing,signalling, exposing.

Example:Realising the danger ,people fled from the cities.

shaking away the nerves, he approached the microphone.

Emerging from the water , the swimmer was greeted with cheers.

Realising that I missed my shot,I started running.

Emerging from the water,came a creature attacking me.

my elected government

 We have been working on an elected government work.We had to research 5 key points about an elected official and write it down on pikto chart or canva.

Here is the link to my work

pikto chart

Write that essay:sentence

Adverb-describe a verb-quickly

Verb-doing word-running

preposition-a word that gives location or movement e.g in,under,on

The adverbs sentence

Start sentence with an adverb,it adds interest and intrigue 
Remember the rule:When you start the sentence with an adverb you need to put a comma after the adverb and then finish the sentence .

some adverbs-slowly,interestingly,suddenly,often,surprisingly,simply,excitedly,unfortunately,fortunately,confusingly,
convincingly,remarkable,significantly,firstly,
Example-surprisingly,Mrs Handley was on time to class unfortunately,she had forgotten her keys.

Sentence's buy me
Hrishaal was about to kick the ball,but unfortunately he missed.
Hrishaal's friend throw a paper ball ,but surprisingly the paper ball hit the teachers
surprisingly hrishaal  friend comes in a Tesla to school, but unfortunately he brings the worst lunch.

The preposition sentence:
Remember the rule:When you start a sentence with a preposition you need to put a comma when the movement or position ends.

Example

In 2013,Hornby high accepted year 7/8 students.

throughout my time in at school,I have learnt many things.

Preposition:In,throughout,under,above,between,below,on,around,near,against,within,after.

Against the wall sat memphys watching in his chromebook

Throughout the break I scored 2 goals

underneath 

Game time

This week I played games in our health class for the first half an hour I played cards and twisted with my group and the other groups where playing different games.
Every 10 min we had to rotate to a new game It was fun but I had to leave half of the class because I had sports and had to leave early.

Essay brainstorm

P.E improves your lung function

Regular sport causes more oxygen to be drawn into the body with carbon monoxide and waste gases expelled. This increases the lung capacity during sport, improving lung function and efficiency.

its makes you have a stronger heart.

Your heart is a muscle and needs frequent exercise to help it keep fit and healthy. A healthy heart can pump blood efficiently around your body. Your heart will improve in performance when it is regularly challenged with exercise. Stronger hearts can improve overall health of the body.

P.E develops a better relationship

Sports enables you to build better relationships with people you may be aware of, but not know personally. Through frequent sport you can get to know a lot about an individual’s personality, their strengths and weaknesses. Sport with colleagues is a good opportunity to build better relationships and networks that may help you in your job.