I am a Year 9 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment.
Thursday, July 8, 2021
Friday, July 2, 2021
DTE summary blog post
So far my group has created a plan of our game design.We are do the app sett up on google slides and planing how the app is going to be like when its created.
My video game
Tuesday, June 22, 2021
Write that essay sentence 3
The ed sentence
Try starting your sentence with the -ed form of the verb.It makes for a punchy start to a sentence.
remember the rule:When you have finished your -ed phase,place a comma,then write the rest of the sentence.
Some-ed words:Surprised,exited,angered,possess,committed,electrified,undaunted,overpowered,concerned,delighted,enthralled.
Example:Determined to win,Tony pushed himself in the last meters of the sprint.
concerned for the well being of others, the Prime Minister passed new laws.
Horrified by the gore,I turned away from the screen.
My examples:
Determined,Alex forced himself to the limit.
Pleased of the students,the teacher gave out chocolates.
Overpowered,The villain destroyed the city.
Horrified,the students all ran out of class.
The Power sentence
If you waffle a lot in you writing,try using a power sentence.Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less.Get straight to the point.
Example:
Money is the root of all evil.(7)
What is right isn't always popular.(6)
treat people the way you want to be treated.(9)
money isn't everything in life.(5)
Monday, June 21, 2021
Write that essay sentence 2
The W sentence
Try starting your sentence with a W word.These sentence make you work sound thoughtful and knowledgeable.
Remembered the rule:Not every W words work as a sentence starter.Remember to put your comma in when the parts of the sentence affected by your W are finished.
Some W words you can use:Who,while,whilst,whereas,when,where,what,with,whom.
Example:Whilst the teacher was talking ,the students were pretending to listen.
With a majority of the votes,Hitler seized power.
When the bell rings,we run to leave class.
When the teacher writes on the the students talk behind her.
While the teachers talking, Karuria is listening to music
Whilst karuria and hrishaal where listening to music,they were also doing there work.
Whilst the teachers talking,karauria was listening to music
when the teacher came to see hrishaal work, he quickly changed the tab.
The ing sentence
Try start the sentence the-ing form of the verb.Swimming
Remember the rule:When you have finished your-ing phase,place a comma,then write the rest of the sentence.
Some ing words:Listening ,Watching,running,recycling,realising,emerging,grasping,speaking,analysing,signalling, exposing.
Example:Realising the danger ,people fled from the cities.
shaking away the nerves, he approached the microphone.
Emerging from the water , the swimmer was greeted with cheers.
Realising that I missed my shot,I started running.
Emerging from the water,came a creature attacking me.
Wednesday, June 16, 2021
my elected government
We have been working on an elected government work.We had to research 5 key points about an elected official and write it down on pikto chart or canva.
Here is the link to my work
Tuesday, June 15, 2021
Write that essay:sentence
Adverb-describe a verb-quickly
Verb-doing word-running
preposition-a word that gives location or movement e.g in,under,on
The adverbs sentence